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Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Key Points of Persuasive Writing

What are the key points of persuasive writing?

Some of the key points of persuasive writing is to persuade or convince someone to believe or support your opinion on a subject of your choice like if you wanted someone to believe that vampires exist or why people should support the government more you would need a reason to do that and you need to try and make them believe you with your speech or reason

One key feature about persuasive writing is that you can get one person, one group, one crowd or even the world and this feature is about how persuasive writing can change peoples lives like an election like labour against national, they had to give good reasons for a party to have the best chance of being chosen.

Another key feature about persuasive writing is that persuasive writing is mostly used to debate about something that you think is unfair or your opinion of something that you wish to prove or explain or if you were to market a particular product, process or line of thought like a person stating an idea and him trying to influence others

Tuesday, November 1, 2016

This is a slideshow about stars, I personally chose it to research because it is a bit unique and I've not known a lot about stars so there are lots of facts and there are also some video's on some of my slides so I hope you enjoy.

Friday, October 28, 2016



Hello this is a story about a bird called wing and he was being bullied by the murder of crows and I had to write how the characters felt and what they did and put it into a story, hope you enjoy

WING


There was once a boy named Wing and he only had one wing and he was playing his flute then a murder of crows have flew by and surrounded him and he was scared out of his mind and then they bullied him because he had a missing wing and they took his flute and did not know what it was and tried to use it in some way but it found no use in it so it threw it on the ground and Wing was already dashing off and he hid in his house and locked the door and the very next day he made a cardboard wing and put it on and made a slingshot device and he flew but after a few moments his cardboard wing broke and fell off and then he fell to the ground the murder of crows heard him hit the ground and the found him and then they were going to do evil stuff to him and then a two winged humanoid saved him and then he saw it was a female and he also saw when she fought them one of her wings were torn off by the crow and they both had an idea and they held hands and used their wings in sync to fly out of the crow territory.

Wednesday, October 19, 2016

A time I was proud

This is some writing about what I was proud of its not much but I was still working on my writing skills so I hope you enjoy


Friday, October 14, 2016

Hello this is my maths that I did on my lesson yesterday (13/10/16) and I am trying to improve on my decimals and it was a bit of a challenge but I pulled through

Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Greece country study

Our class did a country study about Greece and it is to give me more understanding about Greece and be more aware of the good and bad things so here is my presentation.